



Bitter
She felt the first tears running down her face, showing her grief. That was the first most human demonstration she'd ever had.
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View profileUniversitária. Fujoshi. Ficwritter. 21 anos. Já tinha algum tempo que não postava nada aqui, mas pretendo retomar e participar mais. Sinto s...
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Queen Vee
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“I believe it's a tremendous lack of respect for a fanfic like this not to have a single recommendation, so let's start with mine. 259 words. Three digits. Three reasons why I'm recommending this: 1- Many people don't like stories that are too short, because they think there will always be some piece missing from the puzzle. In other narratives, it is true, this happens. Not here. In a three-digit number below 300, the author brought us everything the plot needed, and even though the end leaves us with the desire "I want more", it is not due to the lack of information, but rather due to factor number two. 2- The writing is wonderful. I don't know if I should say "impeccable", but that's the impression it gives. Clean, crisp, clear. Polite, I say. Very few words filled with infinite meanings that I believe surpass long fics with thousands of endless and tedious chapters. 3- The aura that the author conveys only contributes. Even though I've never read anything like this, just the 259 words of Mello x Near left me with an uncontrollable desire to magically sprout in your inbox and kiss your feet so you can write something with me. After all, someone who wins you over in 259 words must be one of the most incredible creatures on the planet. Three factors. Three digits. Three minutes for me to write this. Thanks. Now take my three reasons and move your mouse to "Bitter", because the flavor left on your lips will be more than just sweet.”






