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The first page
King's Cross station
Without doubt, Slytherin!
Gina's pages
First detention
The revenge.
Draco Malfoy
Alinne Rookwood
The perfect gift.
I'm really mad.
The bigger Saukerl of history.
April 22
Obviously, that was awesome.
The sentence unfinished.
Missing what?
Half of the family.
Do you think i'm stupid?
The letter
Oh Merlin, why do i did that?
Elizabeth vs. Lucius
Everyone has that name
Harry, i need to tell you some
Food War.
Happy Birthday, Luna.
Attack. Now!
Delcroxs? What?
Do I see the future?
Liz.
You! You killed our parents!
What?
Lily is a uncontrolled crazy.
Let's buy our brooms
New friendship unknown
His name is... Frederich.
Abusing of autorit, Harry?
16, Amen! You get here!
Bludger motherfucker.
How?
Sorry for everything, Allynne.
Searching Lunny
Who is weak? - Part One
Who is weak? - Part Two
Who is weak? - Part Three.
Annie, come back. Please.
Yeah, you really hate me.
My sister loves me... I can die happy.
A letter from... My mom?
Another mistery, damn.
The Forbibben Florest
Why are you here?
Annie... Stay strong.
I'll find out everything.
Gina, will you marry me?
N.I.E.M.'s and plans.
Stupid and without attitude.
Prom suck.
The last night.
The war will start.
This is War. - Part One.
This is War - Part Two
This is War - Part Three
This is War - Part Four
This is War - Part Five
This is War - Part Six
You're a Saukerl, Adam!
The day what seems night.
Marianne is dead
One day, I hope. I'm fine.
The End - Parte One
The End - Part Two
The end - Part Three
Bonus 1 - Lunny's rescue
bom a fic e boa mais não vou acompanha-lá ela e muito grande e está tudo postado era pra vc posta pouco a pouco.
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Bem, eu avisei no último review que iria postar tudo assim .-. Já tem tudo pronto, só tem um capitulo faltando pra reescrever. Nós queremos continuar ela logo, e só estamos postando ela no nyah agora por que alguns de nossos leitores não tinham conta do FeB .-.
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