Comentários em “Four Five Second's”: “Meu casamento dos sonhos...SQÑ”

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Duda Souza

AMEI! O contexto..TUDO!

Essa fic chegou para dar o que falar, sem esquecer de divar! (Fiz uma rima sem perceber).

Tenho uma pergunta, a fic vai ter hot?

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yzha França Autor

Obrigada amor! Sim acho que no terceiro cap?tulo ter? alguma coisa parecida... bjss

forever alone
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O que mais gostei: interessante continua
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yzha França Autor

Obrigada amor!

Juh Stoessel
O capitulo ficou otimo ! amei ! continua logo por favor !!!! 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝

O que mais gostei: TUDOOOOOOO!
O que acho que pode melhorar: bem .. eu acho que vc devia escrever assim " Porque eu tinha que ME casar ? " em vez de "Porque eu tinha que MIM casar?" isso é mas uma dica do que qual quer coisa mas leva em conta Okay?
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yzha França Autor

Obrigada pela dica! Obrigada vou continuar logo sim

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Milena West Oliver

Amei.

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yzha França Autor

Own. Muito obrigada anjo!

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yzha França Autor

Vlw vou continuar sim

Liv Blancog

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yzha França Autor

Ahhhh! Vlw my angell.
Obrigadaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....uffa! Rsrs quando puder sempre comente!