O capitulo ficou otimo ! amei ! continua logo por favor !!!! 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝
O que mais gostei: TUDOOOOOOO!
O que acho que pode melhorar: bem .. eu acho que vc devia escrever assim " Porque eu tinha que ME casar ? " em vez de "Porque eu tinha que MIM casar?" isso é mas uma dica do que qual quer coisa mas leva em conta Okay?
AMEI! O contexto..TUDO!
Essa fic chegou para dar o que falar, sem esquecer de divar! (Fiz uma rima sem perceber).
Tenho uma pergunta, a fic vai ter hot?
Obrigada amor! Sim acho que no terceiro cap?tulo ter? alguma coisa parecida... bjss
O que mais gostei: interessante continua
Obrigada amor!
O que mais gostei: TUDOOOOOOO!
O que acho que pode melhorar: bem .. eu acho que vc devia escrever assim " Porque eu tinha que ME casar ? " em vez de "Porque eu tinha que MIM casar?" isso é mas uma dica do que qual quer coisa mas leva em conta Okay?
Obrigada pela dica! Obrigada vou continuar logo sim
Amei.
Own. Muito obrigada anjo!
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Vlw vou continuar sim
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Ahhhh! Vlw my angell.
Obrigadaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....uffa! Rsrs quando puder sempre comente!