Comentários em “Hot as Ice”: “Capítulo 4”

ritinha_cr

Ri horrores com esse cap! uhesuhe

Gentem eu bem que digo que se é pra pegar homens como esses é preciso ficar lesada que nem a Bells eu ficoooo sem problema algum!! kkkk

Katy Clearwater

huhsuhsushsu Eu queria ser lesada se fosse para ser pega assim tbm ^^. Bjks amore e vlw o coment

DiCullen

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Katy Clearwater

rsrsrsr Hj tem mais. Bj

E
ELO

To garrando uma ódio dessa mulher, se esfrega com os dois e depois chora, tem dó!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Eu iria estar sorrindo de orelha a orelha KKKKKKKKK

Bjos

Katy Clearwater

hushsushushsu E eu! Mas a Bella é songa e a opinião dela não conta...rsrsrsrs. Bjks

alemorais

"Gelado como um chup chup"- Foi a melhor, sem duvidas! EDiiiii! já disse que eu adoro Chup chup?kkkkkk

Papo com a Bella: Vagaba? Putz, então vc é vagaba de classe pq ter o Ed e o jake não é pra qualquer uma não! Eu tbm queria ser vagaba se fosse desse jeito!kkkkkkk

Se a fic está aprovada? Nussa! imagina! Humor e sexo, é o que eu quero da vida!kkkkkkkkkk

BJs Clubinho da maldade!kkkkk

Katy Clearwater

hushsushsushsu... Membro honorária já...kkkkkk. Ai como eu queria ser vagaba assim *-* Oh vida! Bjks linda.

Yaya Gremelin Detah Aion

*o* meu pai me abanaaaaa

hot dog....¬.¬ ui...é poucoooooo (6)

eu também quero aprenderrr *w*

*safada sem noção mais lerda que a bella* XD

to A-D-O-R-A-N-D-OOOOOO

*-* eu to achando que as coisas só estão começando a esquentar.....

continuem por favorrrr *o* *w*

Katy Clearwater

rsrsrsrsrs Sim e agora vão pegar fogo. Bjks linda. Cap on ^^

Ge Franco

o Jake naum deixou barato msm, robo a Bella facinho, facinho

e essa dela chorar, depois de ficar com o Jake esquecia o que eu comi no almoço

kkkkkkk

bjokas

Katy Clearwater

rsrsrsrsr Eu disse que se o Ed foi aquilo para preparar o core para o Jake...kkkkkk. Bjks

raruiva

FOI MUITO ENGRAÇADO ESSE CAP. EEEE O LESADA SORTUDA!!!

Katy Clearwater

Oxii nem me fala! Bjks gata e novo cap on hj

Dame Lanni

Caraleo, amei oow. dpsaokdpsoakdpsoakdpasokdspak Edward TROUXA!! vai contando vantagem, vaai. daspokdsapokdspaokdsaokdsa

Mais? ;*

Katy Clearwater

hushsushsushus... O bom é que aki ninguem fica para trás 666~. Bjks

N
NiviaMar

Aê!!! O troco do Jake foi muito mais gostoso!
Adorei todos os adjetivos dos nossos mega fafadênhos...
chup chup (cmg não sobrava nem a embalagem!!!), hot dog com salsicha super mega... hummmm Tá parei!
E o Jake ainda propõe pra lesada da Bella q ela pode ficar com os dois.
CAra, faz essa FDP acordar pra vida!
Vai chorar se sentindo uma vagaba?
Ah, kc7!!! Tá de sacanagem, né????
Manda o Jake propor isso pra mim aqui!
Fico com Ed, Jake e meu marido ao msm tempo
num delicioso ''Menage á Trois'', ou melhor "Quatroá" kkkkkk
Meninas, vocês são demais!
Adorei!!!!
Só quero ver quem vai tirar o selinho da Bella.
Torcendo pro meu delicinha caramelizado!!!!!!!!
Bjks!!!!!
P.S.: Amiga de sócia do CLubinho da Maldade tem recomendação?
Alemorais, vota a meu favor!!!! =D

Katy Clearwater

rsrsrsrsrs Ai Hot Dog! Eu queria só um Hot Dog e jamais teria fome novamente *-*...hushsushus. Dramatica eu sei...rsrsrsrs, mas a Bella é muito lerda. Eu queria ser vagaba assim aki em casa *sonho*. Novo cap on hj amore, espero que goste. Bjks

j
julyporto

Rolei de rir com esse capítulo... Super safadenho, mas hilário!!! Bella se achando vagaba... Jake e Edward amigos e brigando... Muito bom!

Vocês conseguiram um fato inédito... Me fazer ler algo com Edward... Fantastic...

Bjks!

Katy Clearwater

hahahahahahah.... Menina eu tbm não sou fã dele, mas quando ele não morde fronha até que desce...kkkkkk. Bjks

Ara Luna

tudo perfeito,inclusive as notas finais das três pervertidas mais loucasssssss que eu já vi kkkkkkkkkk

olha o edward pode até ser safadinho,mas jake é jake uiiii que isso,bella se fazendo de lesa tá conseguido muita coisa já hein

eu só quero o jake,fatooooo

ri litros como sempre,a fic alternando sempre entre a comédia e o erótico,adoro um perigo

jake ensina eu,prometo que aprendo rapidinho

jacobeijosssssssssssssssssssssss

Katy Clearwater

hushsushsushsu Num é a toa que fundamos o Clube 666~. Eu tbm quero aprender com um Jake desse... Táparey...rsrsrs. Bjks

Adinha

Ai gente é uma tortura mental isso....esperar até segunda pra ver como o ed vai revidar....meu pai do céu! chorei litros de rir aki com o zoo-necró, mas eu seria sem exitar.... é muito hot para um dog só... chup-chup*euchupooosemproblemas*¬¬

Katy amore pra arranjar um jake pervo assim , eu num sei como faz, já tentei de tudo..to pensando em tentar uma mãe de santo...kkkkkkkkk ***Jakepegael***

é injusto mesmo fer, se num fosse cada uma de nós teria um jake pra si e não teríamos que dividi-lo nos nossos sonhos...cê escreveu pouco hj!

é verdade maduh flor, si nem como é isso, como pode vagaba e ainda chorar por ser uma...eu no caso dela até qria ser....ai ai.

Arrasaram de novo! AMODORO vcs 3!!!

Katy Clearwater

Ahhhh nem me lembre que ainda me falta o Jake. Oh vida! Obrigada pelo coment gata mesmo me lembrando da minha tristeza... *-* Eu quero um Jake pervo *-*....kkkkkk. Bjks

heri

me diz quem escreve Jacob é Katy e quem escreve Eward é Madu ou cada uma faz um capitulo? pq ta hilario esse jogo de vingança de vcs, cada um deles se aproveitando da leza...que ta BEM ESPERTA,VIU...

bjãoOOO ri muito aqui ...ta otima a fic

Katy Clearwater

hushsushsush As perversidades brotam tanto que cada hora sai de um jeito...kkkkkkk. Que bom que está gostando ^^. Bjks